Narrative


 * __Monday 11 July__**

__**Forever After**__

Blake Johnston, Nina Johnston, Connie Johnston, Bell johnston and you can’t forget Max there energetic dog who is scared of nothing all live in a small town called Oaks Town. Oaks Town is cleanest place in the whole country where the sun never stops shining, on the east side of town is a forest this is where Blake goes hunting. Blake is a very sporty person. His hair is short and brown, his eyes are brown too. His wife's name is NIna she has long dark brown curly hair, her eyes are light blue. She is. Nina and Blake have two daughters one is named Bell she is 13, she is very kind like her mum, she is very girly and does not like getting her hands dirty. Bell’s sisters name is Connie she is 15, she is friendly but can lose her temper very fast. Connie loves sport and going hunting with her Dad. She has long blonde curly hair, her eyes are a very light blue she is very tall for her age. The Johnston’s are a loving family with a secret.

Today Connie, Blake and Max are out hunting while Bell and Nina are at home baking some scones for when they get back. “There, shhhhhh be quite, I’m going to sneak up you stay here ok” said Blake “yea” connie answered. BANG “damn missed it”. “Oh well it’s getting dark should we head back” blake asked “alright lets go”. “I hope they’re coming back soon it’s getting late”commented Nina “I’m sure they’ll be back shortly”

__**Forever After**__
 * __Monday 4 July__**


 * Setting**- In a small town called Oaks Town, everyone knows everyone. There is a big forest on the east side of the town which is where the spring is. Oaks town is a very green town where there is no litter and the sun is always shining. The air is always clean no smoke or anything.


 * Characters**- In Oaks town live a family with two teenage girls and their Mum and Dad. The girls names are Connie who is the oldest she is 15 and Bell is 13 their Mum is named Nina who is 38 years old and there Dad is named Blake who is 39. They are a loving family with a secret.


 * Complication**-they are immortal because when connie was about 10 and bell was about 8 blake went hunting in the forest and he found a spring, and he ran out of water so he filled up his drink bottle with water from the spring and he thought that his family could get their water supply from the spring for free, five years past and none of them looked any different. People find out that they are immortal and and want to know why.


 * Resolution-**


 * Who-** Dad-Blake Johnston is an outgoing person that loves going hunting he has dark brown hair and always wears a hat he has Mum-Nina Johnston, Oldest Daughter-Connie Johnston, Youngest Daughter bell Johnston and there dog


 * What-** They are immortal


 * When-** 1940


 * Where-** In a small town called Oaks Town


 * How/Why-** they find a spring that they drink from and become immortal.

**My Learning Targets**

**My next step is: Describe the characters in more detail and bring them to ‘life’. When you are writing really focus on setting the scene.** **I will achieve this by: Using language resources and descriptive language. Use your sense to set the scene. You have a great outline I can’t wait to see it all written up!** **Date achieved/signed: Miss Stovold**

__ Thursday 9th June __

This is our prior knowledge of metaphors displayed as a wordle document

Definition of a metaphor: Metaphors are comparisons of two unlike things without using signal words such as LIKE and AS e.g he is a cheater e.g



This is our prior knowledge of similes displayed as a wordle document Definition of a Simile: comparing something to something else that is the opposite using words AS and LIKE

Topic: Identifying Similes Directions: Complete the simile by filling in the blank. 1. The car was as dirty as a. mud pie 2. The candy was like__. fireworks in my mouth __ __3. His hands were as big as____. a whales tale __ __4. My little brother sounds like a__ __. laughing hyena __ __5. My room is as messy as__ __. a pig sty __ __6. School is like__. being trapped. 7. The chair was as hard as a __. concrete footpath __ __8. Her hair looked like__. a chocolate ocean of waves 9. The monster’s breath was like. a cattle truck with a full load. 10. The water was as cold as. my ice block out of the freezer 11. My lunch tasted like. dry cardboard 12. The rabbit was as soft as. candy floss

Metaphors Metaphors are imaginative ways to describe something by comparing that thing to something else. For example, if I wanted to say that Dan is tall, I could say that Dan is a giant.

Use a metaphor to describe somebody who is:

tall Henery is a giant kind Bella fast Jade is a cheater slow smart Anne is a brain box fat sneaky Matt is a snake angry beautiful Tina is ugly stubborn short Ben is a midget thin Steph is a toothpick silly Cam is a clown scared easily He is a giant. He is a 747 She is an angle.